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Jul 7, 2023Liked by St John Starling

Let Danny say fuck!

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While fuck is the obvious swear choice for Danny to use, consider this: bitching bingus. Anyway, some key developments for Victor as a character. Now I call him by his first name instead of consistently forgetting it. I’m actually serious the change in address feels huge.

Danny and Sylvia are back in action. Guessing Victor is going to look for Lord Vane once he’s better. Getting knocked out seems to have filled him with determination. I suppose seeing vague hints of a monstrous form of your not boyfriend would do that to a monster fucker.

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Honestly even knowing all this was coming, when I wrote this part of the book I could feel my perception of Victor transform along with it.

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Jul 7, 2023Liked by St John Starling

First name basis with Danny and Sylvia!!!!!!!! Huge character growth -- he's not held apart from them anymore, he's allowing himself to be one of them!

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We're all so proud of him! 😭

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Jul 7, 2023Liked by St John Starling

Let Danny Say Fuck!! The lesbians should be allowed to curse. as a treat.

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Jul 7, 2023Liked by St John Starling

Let Danny Say Fuck

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Jul 7, 2023Liked by St John Starling

Personally, I think that not only should Danny be given a license to say "Fuck" but also a limited allowance of slurs in case of situations where it would be really funny

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Jul 8, 2023Liked by St John Starling

Wow the day's events certainly seem to have changed something for Victor πŸ‘€

Also idk why but Danny seems like someone who'd get creative with "shit"

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Jul 8, 2023Liked by St John Starling

campaigning SO hard for bitch to be danny's swear i'm so serious!! call him a bitch!

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