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Danny said fuck! More importantly things are starting to clear up here. The whole situation with Victor arriving early slipped my mind, had no idea it was all the work of the lesbians, who have been far more involved than it appeared at first. Things make more sense after this. Also did not expect to see Manichaeism referenced.

And now the stakes for the endgame feel like they've been laid out. Victor, please resist your human sacrifice fetish and do something to actually break this cycle.

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Manichaeism! Don’t worry I know plenty more surprising words than that :P (thank you!)

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Jul 14, 2023Liked by St John Starling

possibly my favorite chapter yet! besides the fact that everyone is gay and danny got to say fuck, we got lore! i had to stop and look up three different words! now That’s a good chapter !!

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Thank you! What’s the point of writing a novel if you don’t make people break out the google search at least once?

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Jul 15, 2023Liked by St John Starling

It's so exciting to start getting that lore!! I'm even more curious now about what circumstances created Lord Vane's *~condition~*. I feel like there's got to be a Third Option but can't for the life of me guess at what it is (but also the existing choices Sylvia has offered are equally tasty in a tragic way so really can't go wrong!)

Also, should've known the lesbians have been Involved since the beginning, of course they have

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I can’t say a word ;)

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Jul 19, 2023Liked by St John Starling

I wish I had something insightful and witty to say but I just read about 15 chapters of this in one sitting so my brain is mush in the best possible way. However I can say that I enjoyed this so so much and will be anxiously awaiting the next installment now that I'm caught up!

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Thanks!! I always love to hear this >:)

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Lesbian vampire hunters? This story is a gift that keeps on giving!

Also I want to day that the "For God’s sake won’t somebody show this guy a calendar." made me laugh harder than it should.

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Well shit, this is the greatest piece of fiction I have read in MANY years. Genuinely. I love this!

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