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Oh boy, the last spicy scene, this really is the end game. Also I feel that with the schedule, recently I set a post for 12 AM instead of 12PM, so it went live without my knowledge while I slept. I was about to message you before this post went up because I was worried.

Like that Victor didn't write down the poem, adds to the mystery and reminds us this is his narrative, we're only getting what he writes down. This also means any bit of inconsistency or errors is just Victor's fault, though I can't think of any.

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YEAH it’s so easy to do I’m almost surprised I haven’t already made this mistake.

(I think the poem is really fun too lol)

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Dec 9, 2023Liked by St John Starling

I Am Capable Of Such Normalcy About Them. I am soooo normal about this and I am NOT tearing soft furnishings with claws and teeth

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😈😈😈

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Oh good, I just refurnished them. Wait, are those claw and teeth marks? AHHHHH!

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Dec 10, 2023Liked by St John Starling

"In succession we disobeyed the prohibitions of Genesis, Matthew, and Leviticus" - pretty much every line of this chapter was delicious, but this is the one that made me actually laugh out loud out of left field

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😘 thank you!

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