Hello Darlings,
St John here from October 2024! What you are about to read is the draft version of What Manner of Man, as it was originally serialized throughout 2023. The novel has since been significantly edited and extended, and should you like to read the finished version of the story, it is available at the retailer of your choice or DRM free on my Itch.io store.
Now, without further ado, this is What Manner of Man:
What Manner of Man contains the correspondence, journal entries, and other selected papers of Victor E. Ardelian, of unknown parish1, who was an ordained priest of the Catholic Church. The events described in the correspondence took place, by my estimate, between the months of February to June or July of the year 1950.
I have undertaken the task of presenting this material on behalf of a close personal friend who, for reasons of his own, wishes to remain anonymous. It recently came into his possession by way of inheritance, as a direct descendant of Vera Ardelian, to whom the majority of the letters were originally addressed.Â
Despite their being addressed to her, Vera Ardelian never read any of what follows.Â
It wasn’t until some years after Vera’s death that a collection of letters addressed to her was found and, eventually, delivered — along with all the papers from which this material has been selected — to her eldest daughter. This daughter, the aunt of my friend, confided their contents to him. No matter how often he asked, however, she would never consent to their publication. She was not a notably open-minded person, I gather, and there can be little doubt that her refusal was due primarily to the extremely personal and, at times, shocking nature of some of the journal entries — and possibly to the considerable scandal they might even now cause in some quarters. It was only in response to my friend’s earnest pleas that she refrained from destroying these papers outright. It has been his fixed desire for many years that they should be put into connected form and presented to the world. Now, with his aunt’s recent passing, this has at last become possible.
The piecing together of these materials into a coherent, unified narrative has been a labour of over a year and given the two of us more than a few sleepless nights. Many passages were undated and many more were partly or entirely destroyed by water or fire. The order in which they have been presented is in a few instances hardly more than an educated guess.
When you’ve read it, though, I’m confident you’ll agree with me that this was very much worth the effort. The result is a thrilling account of Father Ardelian’s remarkable experiences on the island of Swallow’s Rest — the exact location of which, at the time of writing, no one has yet been able to ascertain2 — and, in particular, of his intimate association with a man named Alistair Vane.Â
The delicate question of the discretion and good taste of including the full, uncensored version of this text is a matter to which my friend and I have devoted serious consideration. Due to the highly personal nature of the journals, along with some potential offense to the Catholic Church, it was not an easy decision to present these records in their entirety. Ultimately, however, intellectual honesty won out. In light of their undoubted historical significance, it is my friend’s wish that these documents be published in as complete a form as could be managed. My job is not that of censor and neither I nor my friend feels it’s our place to sanitize or suppress any details.
That isn’t to say this story is completely intact, though. In some cases text was deliberately effaced by the author and little of this has proved recoverable. Sometimes whole pages had to be painstakingly reconstructed from fragments. So I must beg the reader’s patience and forgiveness for their weary transcriber if there are occasional omissions or gaps in the text.
I wish to add that despite the shocking and, in some cases, scarcely credible nature of the events described in these papers, it is my belief that it is all — or, at least, very nearly all — true.
What Manner of Man will be presented in weekly installments, as best fits the timeline of events. Readers should be advised of the sexually explicit nature of some chapters.Â
Your humble servant,
St John Starling
Curiously enough, the original parish served by Father Ardelian was unable to be precisely determined despite consulting a variety of church records. Something somewhere seems to have been mislaid.
Not altogether surprising, perhaps, as Father Ardelian himself notes the fact that it is not recorded on most maps. At present the nearest I’ve been able to get is that it may be somewhere off the coast of Scotland, Wales, or Cornwall. I suspect that several words and phrases in the text by which its location might have been identified have been deliberately effaced.
I like the meta fiction framing here, distinguishes itself from Dracula with the introduction and the emphasis on how not all of the story survived. Some of the dates being guesswork is interesting. Probably an unpopular opinion, but hoping for even more footnotes in future chapters. I want to know more about John's efforts to preserve and present the documents, how he tried to date the dateless entries and where the lacunae are.
OMG I CAN'T WAIT